Thursday, May 01, 2008

A Poetry Friday Original: Graduating


May is now upon us. It's time for graduation and the best weather of the year.

I wrote this poem in honor of my graduating seniors. It's written in the spirit of great pride and just the tiniest bit of exasperation. Let me know what you think the last line means. (Oh, and I'm on the roundup this week. So leave me a comment and I'll link up the party throughout the day.)

Graduating

Seniors write at 4 am:
Hey Professor!
My laptop,
My roommate,
My tortoise,
My best friend...

A squirrel on a branch
framed by blue sky,
through leaded glass
stands, hands held high.
This is a stick up, suckas!

5 minutes late,
10 minutes late,
The seniors slink in.
Sorry, Kelly,
the sun, my band.
A final exam.

Every May:
I stand to one side,
tears blink my eyes,
(seriously)
while they march by.

In robes expensive, borrowed, or sewn.
In dresses, in saris, in drag, their own.
I am so proud, watch my students and wave.
Listen to speeches, I hope in the shade.

We did it! We’re off!
To Uzbekistan,
Chile, Lesotho,
or maybe just France.
Those papers, those classes.
Those rooms, and the squirrels.
They’re behind us now.
Forgotten sweet pearls.

Goodbye, old college,
I’ll miss you so. We’re...

Oh wait...

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Let the wild rumpus begin:

Ruth contributes an original poem this week called "the dance" over at Two Writing Teachers
.

Little Willow is in with Versos Sencillos (Simple Verses) by Jose Marti at Bildungsroman
.

Elaine Magliaro is here with a humorous children's poem by John Ciardi--"Why Nobody Pets the Lion at the Zoo"--at Wild Rose Reader, and "Consolation," by Wislawa Szymborska, at Blue Rose Girls.

Laura Purdie Salas shares a poem written by a Scotsman hours before his execution, sent in from Edinburgh this week.

John Mutford contributes "Wise Appliance (a found poem)" at The Book Mine Set. (Funny!)

Sara Lewis Holmes shares Alice Pero's "Bad Poem" and starts a discussion on what makes a poem bad at Read Write Believe.

Mary Lee talks changes at work with a little help from Robert Frost at A Year of Reading.

Tadmack is having a great time with pen names and name poems over at Finding Wonderland.

Jama Rattigan finds you can go home again reading Cathy Song's "Leaving" at Alphabet Soup.

writer2be shares Elizabeth Jennings's "Rembrandt's Late Self-Portraits" this week at Findings.

Ruth contributes Sara Teasdale's "May Day" in honor of, well, May Day at There is no such thing as a God-Forsaken Town.

Jill is in at The Well-Read Child with "Insomnia," by Dante Gabriel Rossetti.

HipWriterMama is in with "Let Each Man Remember," by Josephine Jacobsen
. She's also seeking your votes on the five-sentence contest, so head on over and cast your vote!

Tricia forgives Shakespeare for a little love poetry because, well, he's Shakespeare! She's in with "Love's Perjuries" at The Miss Rumphius Effect.

Marcie contributes "Boshblobberbosh," by J. Patrick Lewis honoring Edward Lear, at World of Words.

Eisha shares the lyrics to the James Shelton song "Lilac Wine" at Seven Impossible Things Before Breakfast.

Linda, inspired by Tricia's Food Stretch at The Miss Rumphius Effect, contributes two original food poems at Write Time. (They're great, Linda!)

MsMac talks about what she discovered during Poetry Month over at Check It Out. So...check it out!

Cloudscome shares Emily Dickinson's "New Feet Within My Garden Grow" along with a beautiful photo of new vegetation at A Wrung Sponge.

Karen Edmisten talks about creating poetry lovers at home this week
.

Last week Sylvia Vardell invited Janet Wong to share a poem at Poetry for Children. Janet did and asked for revision recommendations. This week the revised poem is up! (You can also read all the revision suggestions here. What a great exercise.)

Sarah Miller shares some Hafiz at Reading, Writing, Musing.

Sherry of Semicolon shares a lovely combination of Sara Teasdale, John Milton, and Pablo Picasso--all compiled for May Day baskets.

Tiel Aisha Ansari shares an original sonnet--"Eccentric Spheres"--at Knocking from Inside.

MotherReader contributes an original search string poem. (Funny!)

Alkelda of Saints and Spinners is in with a traditional May Day song sung during 'Obby 'Oss Day in Cornwall.

Lisa combines Free Comic Book Day with Poetry Friday with some super-hero themed poems at Under the Covers.

April Poetry maestro Gregory K. of GottaBook is in with an original poem by J. Patrick Lewis!!! Called "A Sixth Grader Sees the Future," this poem won't be out until 2009. DON'T MISS IT NOW.

Michele of Scholar's Blog is here with Robert Herrick's "To The Virgins, To Make Much Of Time."

James, aka RM1(SS) (ret), shares a short poem by James I, King of Scots.

Becky of Becky's Book Reviews contributes
Lord Byron's "She Walks In Beauty" this week.

Liz in Ink shares Marlys West's "Here is the Church" and the story of two bodies
.

Sarah (a.fortis) contributes a Welsh poem this week by Hedd Wyn in original and translation at Finding Wonderland.

Charlotte (Charlotte's Library) writes in and tells us she's "in with a lovely poem about gardens, and plants, and being in the world, by Kerry Hardiein."

Suzanne of Adventures in Living shares a poem by Elizabeth Coatsworth, a poet she and her children are enjoying these days.

Miss Erin shares "On My Way Home from School," by Sonya Sones, this week
.

Paper Doll contributes a poem by her mother Rebecca Kai Dotlich, from Dotlich's book Sweet Dreams of the Wild.

Kelly Fineman
, who always does a fantastic job discussing the structure and origin of poems, is in with Melville's "Shiloh: A Requiem" at Writing and Ruminating.

Lisa has posted Rachel Field's "Something Told the Wild Geese" in honor of a Mama Canada Goose at A little of this, a little of that.

Felicity celebrates Poetry Friday with Robert Frost's classic "After Apple Picking" at Look Books.


59 comments:

PJ Hoover said...

It's a great poem, Kelly, but I gotta say I'm stumped.
Oh wait, I forgot to turn off the hot plate. ???
Oh wait, I forgot to put ice on the beer. ???
Oh wait, I forgot I'm staying on for my masters. ???
You see - I suck at this poetic interpretation stuff.

Kelly said...

Good guesses :) I particularly like your first one!

Jim D said...

Okay, keep in mind that the last poetry I wrote was a Turtle poem submitted last night to Zootles magazine aimed at the 2-6 crowd.

I'm thinking it's pretty straight forward. It's Prof. Kelly saying "Oh wait....They're all leaving, but I'll be back for another group of seniors next year." (The poem is from your POV)

Jim D

Kelly said...

Ding, ding, ding! Jim is the winner :)

I always get all caught up in the spirit of graduation and then realize, drat, I have to head back to my office now.

sc. said...

This is brilliant. Simply brilliant. And so my every spring... fall...

Little Willow said...

Go you!
Go graduates!

Versos Sencillos (Simple Verses) by Jose Marti here:
http://slayground.livejournal.com/369707.html

Elaine Magliaro said...

Loved your poem, Kelly. I said goodby to the students in my children's literature course Thursday night. It was the best group I've had in six years.

I remember the tears at the end of every school year when I taught elementary school. You really get attached to children when you're with them every day.

At Wild Rose Reader, I have a humorous children's poem by John Ciardi--"Why Nobody Pets the Lion at the Zoo."

http://wildrosereader.blogspot.com/2008/05/why-nobody-pets-lion-at-zoo-poem-by.html


At Blue Rose Girls, I have "Consolation," a poem by Wislawa Szymborska.

http://bluerosegirls.blogspot.com/2008/05/poetry/friday-consolation-by-wislawa.html

laurasalas said...

I love this, Kelly. Too rushed to come up with anything, but I love your poem. I only taught for a couple of years, but the end of the school year was sad for me.

I'm in with a poem written by a Scotsman hours before his execution: http://laurasalas.livejournal.com/64182.html

twowritingteachers said...

I'm in with some S&G Song Lyrics:
http://twowritingteachers.wordpress.com/2008/05/02/were-doing-poetry-at-the-zoo/.

Thanks for hosting this week Kelly!

--Stacey

John Mutford said...

I'd say the unexplained "oh wait" pretty well captures the small bit of unease underlying graduations. Nicely done.

I'm in with a found poem called Wise Appliance.

Nick said...

'Oh wait...'

Yes, it's Kelly's 'Oh wait...'. But it rang a bell with me too, remembering my own graduation. Through the euphoria of 'making it', and making it out of there, I suddenly realised, for the first time perhaps in four years, how much I had enjoyed it all (an enjoyment till then clouded by anxiety). Now the anxiety was gone, I definitely thought, as I left university forever, 'Oh, wait...'

Sara said...

Nice one, Kelly. Some parents might be thinking "oh, wait..." too, if their kids move back in! :)

Here's my link. I'm inviting discussion about A Bad Poem today.

Tricia said...

Wonderful poem! I know just how you feel!

I am in today with some Shakespeare and his poem Love's Perjuries.

Thanks for rounding us up.

Mary Lee said...

I'm in this week with some thoughts about work.

TadMack said...

Sheesh, Kel, when I was teaching, I had to sniffle when my fifth graders moved to sixth. I don't know if I could take graduation every single year. Ugh.

The 'oh, wait!' to me was definitely underlying tension of "did I turn in that last paper?" - but I also like that it's you remember that YOU'RE not going to France. *sigh*

I'm in at Wonderland with name poems -- can't seem to let the pen name thing die.

jama said...

Love the poem, Kelly. I thought the "oh wait," was about trying to hold onto the moment just a little longer -- when suddenly realizing this was really it, the school year was over.

Today I'm sharing "Leaving," by Cathy song, a poet from Hawaii: http://jamarattigan.livejournal.com/107940.html

Thanks for hosting!

writer2b said...

Love the poem. I would've guessed the last line was you remembering a stack of ungraded freshman papers home on the desk...

I posted on an Elizabeth Jennings poem, "Rembrandt's Late Self-Portraits." It's here: http://writer2b.wordpress.com/2008/05/02/springtime-resurrection/

Thanks for rounding us up.

Jim D said...

Got the "Oh wait", but is there hidden meaning in the sqirrel stickup???

...or does every campus just have crazed sqirrels?

Jim D

Ruth said...

Happy graduation! Congratulations on completing another year.

I'm in with some sweet Sara Teasdale.

Here.

Jill said...

Great poem! When my students graduated from high school, I always welled up, especially since I'd taught some of them since they were freshmen.

I'm in at The Well-Read Child w/ Dante Gabriel Rossetti's "Insomnia."

HipWriterMama said...

Wonderful poem, Kelly!

I'm in with Josephine Jacobsen's "Let Each Man Remember" and a call for final votes.

Have a great weekend!

Tricia said...

Hi Kelly,
I had some post problems and had to recreate it. Here is the new address:
http://missrumphiuseffect.blogspot.com/2008/05/poetry-friday-loves-perjuries_02.html
Sorry about this!
Tricia

M.F. Atkins said...

Thanks for hosting! I'm in with Boshblobberbosh by J. Patrick Lewis honoring Edward Lear.
http://marcieaf.blogspot.com/2008/05/poetry-friday-boshblobberbosh.html

Marcie
World of Words

eisha said...

Hi, Kelly. Great poem - bittersweet indeed. And even those of us outside of academia get an "Oh, wait..." around this time of year. At least I do.

7-Imp is in with lyrics to the song "Lilac Wine." Thanks for hosting!

Linda said...

Loved your poem.

I have two food poems in response to Miss Rumphius' Monday Poetry Stretch and a review of FOOD FIGHT.
Thanks, Linda
http://ldkwritetime.blogspot.com

msmac said...

Poignant and fun. I reflected on the month of poetry here:
http://maclibrary.edublogs.org/2008/05/02/national-poetry-month-what-i-discovered/
Thank you for hosting.

Cloudscome said...

Great poem Kelly. I enjoyed all those excuses. The Squirrels left hanging just made it kick.

I'm in with some Emily D. today.

Karen E. said...

Love your thought on the last line, Kelly. My first thought was that it was also from your point of view, but that you realized that many of them would be back for grad work the next year. Maybe I just knew too many perpetual students .... :-)

My contribution this week isn't a single poem, but is about creating poetry lovers, and how that's been happening slowly over the years with my children. The post is here.

Sylvia Vardell said...

Love your graduation poem-- what fun to read aloud with multiple voices!

This week I'm "recycling" last week's post, since poet Janet Wong invited poets to critique her posted poem and many DID. See the interesting dialogue on poetry writing and revising!

http://poetryforchildren.blogspot.com/

Andrea Beaty said...

"Oh wait!"

2 words: Grad School

Lovely poem, Kelly!
Thanks for a nice start to my day.
Andrea

Sarah Miller said...

I've got a bit of Hafiz again this week.

Thanks for hosting.

Sherry said...

I've got Sara Teasdale, John Milton, and Picasso. How's that for a combination?

Tiel Aisha Ansari said...

Original sonnet:

Eccentric Spheres

MotherReader said...

I've got some original Search String poetry at MotherReader.

http://www.motherreader.com/2008/05/poetry-friday-search-poetry.html

Alkelda the Gleeful said...

Thanks for hosting! Your poem made me laugh.:) I'm in this week with a traditional May Day song sung during 'Obby 'Oss Day in Cornwall. Padstow May Day Song:
http://saintsandspinners.blogspot.com/2008/05/song-of-week-special-edition-padstow.html

Lisa Chellman said...

Very sweet poem, Kelly! I love the double mention of squirrels. I doubt there's a better animal to exemplify the antsiness of this time of year.

My contribution this week is a post linking poetry and comic books, in promotion of Free Comic Book Day!

Gregory K. said...

I'm up with an original poem by J. Patrick Lewis (!!!!!):

A Sixth Grader Sees the Future

The poem is from a book of his coming out in 2009. Info at my blog and his website

And thanks for hosting, Kelly. I'm loving your originals!

Elaine Magliaro said...

Kelly,

I typed the URL for my post at Blue Rose Girls incorrectly in my previous comment. It should be:

http://wildrosereader.blogspot.com/2008/05/poetry-friday-consolation-by-wislawa.html

Michele said...

I finally made my post !

RM1(SS) (ret) said...

I'm in, with a short poem by James I, King of Scots.

http://theoldcoot.blogspot.com/2008/05/spring-song-of-birds.html

Becky said...

I'm in with Lord Byron's She Walks In Beauty.

Becky said...

Bother, I forgot to post the link.

http://blbooks.blogspot.com/2008/05/poetry-friday-byron.html

Liz in Ink said...

Love this, Kelly!

I posted a Marlys West poem today, about the aging body...

a. fortis said...

Fun poem, Kelly!! With so many teachers in my family, I can definitely relate.

I'm in (here) with a short poem by Welsh poet Hedd Wyn (Ellis Evans).

Charlotte said...

I'm in with a lovely poem about gardens, and plants, and being in the world, by Kerry Hardiein:

http://charlotteslibrary.blogspot.com/2008/05/whats-left-for-peter-hennessy-i-used-to.html

Thanks Kelly!

:: Suzanne :: said...

And yet another Elizabeth Coatsworth. My kids and I are really enjoying her this year.

Erin said...

Thanks for doing the roundup! :)

http://misserinmarie.blogspot.com/2008/05/on-my-way-home-from-school.html

Paper Doll said...

Love your poem! I'm in with a poem by Rebecca Kai Dotlich (a shameless plug for my mom). :)

Kelly Fineman said...

Uzbekistan doesn't get enough play in modern poetry, I think. Well done, all 'round.

I'm in with a poem about the Civil War by Herman Melville, whom I've only just discovered wrote poetry. Here's a link to my post about his poem, "Shiloh."
http://kellyrfineman.livejournal.com/301402.html

lookbooks said...

Thanks so much for rounding up Poetry Friday today!

http://lookbooks.wordpress.com/2008/05/02/after-apple-picking/

alotalot said...

In honor of my friendly neighborhood nesting goose!
http://alotalot.wordpress.com/2008/05/03/poetry-friday-mama-goose/
Lisa

I think the last line is a reminder that YOU won't be leaving and don't need to say goodbye.

Laurag said...

This is the line that tickled me:
Listen to speeches, I hope in the shade.

Every year as we march in, we all look to see who gets to sit in the shade of a couple of large trees and who has to sweat it out in the sun. Alas, our graduation isn't for another WHOLE MONTH!

Thanks for the poem!
(Unfortunately, we won't be back in the north country till the beginning of July. Sorry to miss you again!)

Beth Fehlbaum, Author said...

Dr. Vardell was at the University of Texas at Arlington when I was in "teacher school" there. I never had Dr. Vardell, but I did have her compadre, Nancy Hadaway. It's such a thrill to see Dr. Vardell's name in print!

Beth Fehlbaum, author
Courage in Patience, a story of hope for those who have endured abuse
http://courageinpatience.blogspot.com
Chapter One is online!

Rashed said...

Great poem, Kelly! I really like how sincere it is: that's something that seems to be missing from most poetry today. Ah, you made me miss Grinnell (even though, probably like most other Grinnell alumni, I regularly go through Grinnell-missing sessions).

BTW, Katie and I ran into a Grinnellian a couple of weeks ago: it was Adele; do you know her? She was in one of my classes and in the orchestra with Katie. She's studying to be an organic farmer in France, and just happened to be in the same restaurant in Montreal as us! :)

Too bad I probably won't be able to make it to Reunion this year.

Kelly said...

Hi Rashed! Great to see you on the blog. I hope all is well with you and Katie.

Yes, I know Adele! I'm so happy she's continuing on with her plans and her passion. That's great.

Too bad you won't be at Reunion. It would have been great to get together for coffee.

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